She had been tracking the deer. Her parents had taught her how.
One hour before, finding the hoof prints in the soft earth, she had followed the trail of broken twigs and occasional nibbled leaf until she had located it. Creeping slowly and quietly, not making even the slightest sound, she remained undetected.
She had stumbled across the mysterious circles in a clearing in the forest, and watched as the deer approached them. With a slight twitch of its ears, the deer stepped indifferently through the first circle, and vanished. Completely vanished.
The girl let out a gasp, and walked towards the circles to investigate…
Can you continue the story? Does the girl step through the circle? Can you include some fronted adverbials and different sentence types?
I can't wait to read some! :)
Hi Miss Marshall I have completed the story and Mum will email it to you. Kaitlyn
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ReplyDeleteThank you for your story ending, I have just sent a reply to you via email :)
Finlay loved this and we talked about each ring taking us to a different portal. Finlay drew the different creatures you might find in each one.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great idea Finlay! Were the animals existing animals or did you invent your own?
DeleteHi Miss Marshall, my Mum has sent you the writing and a picture. Kaitlyn
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